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| Winter's Roar 2003-08-04 ch 1,  | abuseOh, wow, this is good, this is very good! AH, gosh this is good! I love how you described the vast array of emotions, and the confussion. I think the numbers really helped the poem to flow, it gave it direction. I like how you're constantly questioning, searching. You really display human emotion well! Wow, hats off to you on an excellent poem!! ~ winter |