your words are like a spiderweb weaving itself around me and immersing me in the beauty of your gorgeous prose. i'm astounded.

hey... though short, they r good 2!! keep writing more, some of the best poetry comes out when u just dont wana go 2 bed...lol, well, write more

its so hard to explain, but its is so good. Like I can't explain how good it is exactly. its real hard to say. But I love it. In joy, that falls in a dark step. Everyday in life dreams jump like spikes and glitter in out imaginations and at the end it kind of shows how they can shatter into broken glasses. Nice
Keep it up...
Maybe when chance comes you can see a few of mine? I know you alrdy know a few of the titles but you may also like and consider r/r 'Elves: Have all forgotten them?' and 'Star Eyes' maybe even 'A Maze'
r/R please ! i love your poem!