i like the "he is profound" part best

It's so pretty! Mmm, you're starting to get into a choppy phrase stage. What happened to all your long windedness? Ah well, doesn't matter. Beautiful both ways.

oh my God, you have no idea how much this reminds me of someone i knew (his name is Jason, i wrote a few poems on him -). This is completely beautiful, and ach...beyond any praise i could give!