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| MusicallyBrainwashed 2006-10-06 ch 1,   | This was a very good story. I'd like to read more if you have more. Also, I'm a bit aware that Julia's parents died in a car crash, but are the parents Martine gave the doctor her real parents who came back from the dead, or step parents? Other than that, nice. Come read my stories anytime. Latersh. |
| Museworks 2005-09-20 ch 1, | Striking beginning. The dialogue was good, the action was interesting, and the whole premise started building suspense right from paragraph one. I hope you decide to continue this story! G. London |
| Love and Shadow 2004-05-15 ch 1, | i'm confused. i thought julia's parents died in the car crash? how come martine gave her parents' number to the doctor? and i don't understand the last part at all. but it's a good story nonetheless. ^^ ~L&S |
| morby 2004-02-24 ch 1, | very good writing, definitely kept me interested |
| aims80 2003-07-06 ch 1, | Interesting beginning, keep writing please. Luv Aims :) |
| Margo 2003-02-11 ch 1, | This story certainly has depth! I am very anxious to read more, please update soon. |
| April2 2003-02-10 ch 1, | Yay, it's up! :] Very good so far, I can't wait for more....there will be more, right? |
| Willum 2003-02-08 ch 1, | A very well written, and quite mysterious beginning that you have here. One typo that stands out, Martine tells that Julia was involved in a car accident with her parents, and was the only survivor, but then gives the doctor the phone number of her parents. Other than that, an interesting story, and one which I hope that you continue with. |