I reaqlly enjoyed reading this.It had a lot of good ideas in it, and I can't wait for more! Keep writing, please!

Did i like it??! Yeah, i liked it! so, go on! what next?

YAY! I liked it! Please write more of the story, I'm extremly curious to what happens next. ^_^

It was interesting. The women will have to get better food than bread if they're going to be in the army, of course... is this the end, or are you going to write another chapter?