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jen
2003-03-11
ch 1,
I wish I could live my life like a bird. no worries except staying clear of cats. very good . you are a very talented writer. don't ever quite. some of us(like me can't write worth flip)
Why must I be Omelette
2003-02-11
ch 1,
hummm... hummm...
I like-es it, but maybe change a few things. Maybe complete the allusion to I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings, "And like our Maya/I know why the caged bird sings:" I dunno... Maya Angelou did write it, right? Or else that little suggestion is totally pointless.

Come to school and roar tomorrow or I'll kick ya with a pointy boot! You missed a quite... amusing... pep rally to-day. Heh. Heh.

PWEASE come to scwool? I'll eat widd yoo! Why am I talking like this... Oh, yeah, I just re-did the Laguna/Ellone part on FFVIII...


---Ewiz... I mean, ELIZabeth.
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