oh my god
WHY DID YOU DELETE THAT CHAPTER?
and what is up with the rule nc17? - wth is up with that? there is no such rule that stakes that an author cannot post explicit sexual interactions between two characters
and wheres the epiloguE?
lol and whats youre emeail? i like the story, original

wow i really like this i thought it sounded a bit odd but i love it!

Damn it!

Damn it. I hoped that this wouldn't happen. I swear every time a story gets good the author throws in sex with a man and it spoils it (for me anyway). I feel that a fantasy story like this should not have to do that like most true storys do.

That's so sweet. You are very good at writing lesbian love abd beleive me I know a lot about lesbians, just read my bio.

I really like the story so far. I don't know it just seems...fun I guess.

Hey Morg! Wicked story, I'm tired as hell though, so I'll finish reading it tomorrow!

actually you can put in that stuff i've left lemons in my stuff and have yet to get them deleted

Even without chapter 4 (kinda disappointed though, :P) This is really a nice story! Had my eyes glued all the way from chapter 1 to 5.

Keep writing! ^_^

that's so beautiful. (sniff)

Oi, this story is great! Its surprisingly different, but it's difference is charming. Too bad chapter 4 wasn't up, I would have loved to see it. Ah well. Looking forward to ch. 6!

What can I say? Alas, I wasn't able to read the fourth chapter, which is a bit of a downer, but that aside, I really love these characters! It stands very well on it's own right now, but if you're planning to write new chapters, then I'm hungry to read them! :)

Wow. :0 that was the best(i think)

omg. ** **. write some more god damn lemon already! u got my pants wet.

this.is.great.