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| Tsukiyo no Yume 2005-02-12 ch 1,  | abuse^^ Have you read "Song of Myself" by Walt Whitman? This is your song. Nothing to mock here! Very good. I like the last line the best. "fussy eater" indeed... ~Tsukiyo |
| Arizosa 2003-07-13 ch 1, | abuseNo mocking here. I think it's making perfect sense. |
| Someone :-) 2003-02-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is really very good. It makes perfect sense, and I wouldn't mock this in any way. Very thoughful. I like this a lot. |
| MelodyReiterLee 2003-02-08 ch 1, | abuseI think this is a great poem. I'm not going to mock you. I don't think there's anything to mock you about. It's perfectly understandable. |