^^ Have you read "Song of Myself" by Walt Whitman? This is your song. Nothing to mock here! Very good.

I like the last line the best. "fussy eater" indeed...

~Tsukiyo

No mocking here. I think it's making perfect sense.

This is really very good. It makes perfect sense, and I wouldn't mock this in any way. Very thoughful. I like this a lot.

I think this is a great poem. I'm not going to mock you. I don't think there's anything to mock you about. It's perfectly understandable.