you must know how i feel sometimes...

except my protector is myself...

Asi es la vita... favorites.

Know what you mean, and I'm sorry t hear your old man's oblivious, too. Least you have a mom to look out for you.

Great writing, btw!

T~H

Nice poem. I liked the begginning better than the end, but it's probably because I can relate to that part.

I liked this .. it comes off as so honest, raw. The rhyme scheme in it is bouncy and random in some parts, but still fitting into the general flow of things. I love the line 'break me like a porcelain doll'. Nice.

Man, I love this poem. I relate so much. My mom yells it me because she thinks im angry and in a bad mood. My dad form time to time stops her but most of the time when he's here he is fulfilling his computer obsession. lol. Nice poem, the familiarity brought some emotion out of me.

Good poem. I'm sorry for the reasons that you have written it. My dad isn't the greatest guy either. They have nothing but love, but it seems they express it in the worst of ways.