Oh.spiffy. I loved your one-day story. V. descriptive. It moved a slightly quickly, but you got your point across and it was v. memorable. Also, you inspired me to write a little bit of Mock Battle.Again, I really liked your short fic. Nice job. :)

I thought this was pretty good. I like English history, I guess my trip to England kinda' made it all seem real to me. I loved the whole castle thing...but I'm getting off topic. Keep up the good work.
luv Aims :)

huh very coll like it so much I added you to favs