Heh, I liked it, especially the last line. Even though you broke rhyme a few times, who cares as long as its good. I have now read all the Mistake fics and this poem, now I shall read more.
::slaps herself for becoming a RABID fan::

you should go to poetry.com you seem to like writing poetry, keep it up =)

hey, like it, luv it. the last line reminded me of 10 things i hate about you though. ah well, good job anyways. ^-^ imma read your mistake fic!

Aw, that's very beautiful. But, it sounds to me more like a song than a poem. Ah, well. ^_^ I love the last line! Gotta go! Ciao!

This poem sorta reminds of my own broken romance with someone... I love the last line of the poem the most.

Hiya, i read your mistake and stuff so far, so i decieded to check out your other writtings ^_^
I love this poem so much, t is really good1
Starflower: Yeah you could make it a song if you already havent.
Me: For once i agree with you. That would be a really pretty song. Neways i like the last part i hate myself for not hating you... thats so, oh man i dont now the righ tword
Starflower: how about Fun, cute, sweet
Me: ill use fun, yep! sorry if spellin is wrong on this review ^_^! Yeah just i like it

Hehe, words from the heart? To who?:P
Touching poem, I get the gist of your feelings....really really nice work!^_^

Great poem! I love poems that rhyme...lol

you broke your rhyme a few times