Wow. *rings the familiar bell* I liked your poem very much.

I'm guessing that you have been wronged before? Well, I could almost feel the pain in this poem... you should try writing a happy poem, like how Mistake makes me feel ^-^

aw thats so sad! it makes me wana cry! i know just how he feels

aww..

aw... you can rhyme so good. Man, you really know how to think really. I think that maybe you were hurt before. Am I right? Cause maybe that is why you can think so clearly and knowingly of life itself. ^-^

i didn't copy the song lyrics. i don't even like the song and i never bothered to actually find out the lyrics. if you're offended, i apologise

I love the poem!...but I didn't quite get...I'm sorry.
Anyway, I thought the poem was off the hook!

It was good but your last few lines were total American Pie. Read the song lyrics, it sounds like you copied

I thought it was a good poem and i can definately relate to how it feels to get ur heart broken. This poem gave out a lot of emotion to the reader. I could feel the pain..I liked it!