EW! Who is our mystery man...lemme guess, he is an agent sent to get her away from her creators? Anywhere close? Way too much Sci fi reading on my part can you tell! LOL

Darwin

Well Short, but intriguing. Well worded and paced.
I tend to write longer chapters but that is me. Heading off to read number two!

Darwin

o, Alice is a spy.good first chap, even if i didn't read the whole thing (no offense, but i lose interest very quickly)