Wow. (eyes widen) It's so good! You do have a knack for this. It's all about depression and stuff, and i can easily relate it to several experiences. You're so good. I hope you write more, even if it's all sad and angsty.
P.S I know how it feels to be all depressed and not be able to sleep. Believe me, I suffered.

wow...this is really pretty. (i just think it is, don't know why)

it totally rocks.

i've been trying FOREVER to write a poem about falling...

1. THIS is like the Mizutaka we all know . . .
2. Write more poetry.
3. *waves* Hello, if you need help, I'm right over here . . .
Good job. I like the sanity hanging by a strand of silken thread line, great imagery.