The format of the last three words is particuraly effective. A few word choices weren't for me, but that's personal preference.
I know that feeling, so well, though I was always fond of razors and my arms. . .I had to quit because it's so warm in Phoenix. . .can't wear long sleeves. And cutting my thighs doesn't give me the same high.
-Jessica

Wow, this is just wow, thats exactly me, I promised I wasn't going to cut, but then I needed to. I love this, very well thought out and wrote!

once again your work speaks so well to me. some of the parts sounded a bit like forced rhyming but then again who doesn't? very good. i've added you to my favs list.

I swear you are just ** amazing. Everything you write is just wonderful! Not many people know, but I cut, too. Not so much now as I use to, but oh well. I relate to how you feel, once again. Are you getting tired of me yet?

~KayWest

Alright! Very good! The way you finish it it's just perfect!

YAY!! Those are the types of poems i like. Unfontunatly, I don't like some of the rhyming at the end. It's a bit forced. But, on the other hand, your flow and imagery was great.
-Anon

Cool. Pain and sorrow are two of my perks. I've been thinking about cutting but I don't think I'll do it.

o, i love the ending, very powerful, the whole thing though is graphic and morbid, excellent job

This is honest and open, and I like it for that. I don't usual go so graphic - but in this case it is inspirational.

RNL

I can really really relate to this so well. I use to cut as well, now ... well if you knew me you'd understnad but either way, very emotional and good poem...

wow. k that was good. very eery, but it has i nice spoken way to it. you have a very nice way with words, you seem how to know how to put them into perspective, and yeah. you show feelings well.

Oh god, this poem is like a chronicle of last night. I guess I shouldn't share that, but it evoked mixed feelings in me.bittersweet, if you like. Sweet because the poem (or song, as i read it) flows in such a way that i can forget it's me that did what i did.bitter because the truth is there, laid bare for me. Thankyou for the reality check.

~TIO

Good rhyming. abrupt ending. not very deep. emotions well expressed. good try. overall not bad.

I like this poem because it makes sense while it rhymes. LOL no I like it because I can feel what the poem is saying. Very impressive!