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| Naomi Schemer 2004-08-02 ch 1, | abusewow, this poem shows how people can be so, well, blind. i liked it allot. -Naomi |
| Appleofdeadfish554 2004-07-01 ch 1, | abuseyou confused do you agree that gays should parents i think you do but correct me if i'm wrong i originaly read it becuse of the summary |
| Lord Jareth 2004-05-20 ch 1, | abuseI can see this is acclaimed for a reason; it's lovely. |
| Shadow 3013 2003-04-27 ch 1, | abuseTouching and beautiful. I actually did my Government term thesis paper over this subject, and it really gets me upset that our govt. is so closed-minded. Nice poem, great emotions. |
| Creative Deficit 2003-02-11 ch 1, | abuseOh, God, how sad this is. I love your picture the homelife you had, its wonderful and seems very honest, like the lines: "We're not the Brady bunch or even close/Real families reach conflict now and then". From your summary, I expectd something totally different, and I was ready to make this review about how wrong you were. Then I read it... Its very good, very very good. Laura |
| J. London 2003-02-10 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was amazing. It emotionally moved me because it just baffles my mind. This truely has to be the best poem I have read on this site. My eyes were glued and I read each word more carefully then the one before. I love it. If I were you I would be very poud of this work. Great job. |