This has the makings of an awesome story. Please don't forget about it.

ugh...ur stories r too good!! i resent u! argh! *sigh* i wish i could write an EIGTH as well as u do!i luv ur stories soo much!! update! update! update!

GAH! UPDATE! As in NOW! ^^
very very very interesting story...I wonder what made Nemuri and Shin-kun (I CAN call him Shin-kun, ne?^^) drifted apart. WA! I have a feeling that this fic is gonna be a fun read. Keep it up!

actually this story sounds like it'd be pretty good as a movie too. :P I like it, you should write more and post it.

I like this chapter! I think it's a great set-up for a story. I really like how well the other characters are described, but what does Nemuri look like? Anyway, I really enjoy reading your stories; keep it up!

maynethat was good, sorry it took so long for me to review, i feel so mean x_X

hope ya write more son!

shin is a meany pants

~!shadow kei!~

more!more!more!more!!

this is good! update soon!

~ms~

eh, the beginning was so cute! but it got sort of better in the end. ^_^ let her had revenge! O_O!! Woman's rights!! -poses-

heh, gomen, anyway o_o that's really good! I can't wait for the next chapter! such imagination ^-^

please continue!

hey this was pretty good, a bit sad though. do continue, i would like to read more.

This story sounds so interesting!! O_O!! please continue! I'm dying to hear about it ^-^

I like it! Why the heck are you STALLING? T_T;;

BTW, sorry about my story delays. I got sick this entire week.u_u;; No excuse, I know, but..well, you know. =D

Anyway, you have a great idea going on. Have the first chapter up by valentines day ATLEAST! It's only appropriate, ya know. =T

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Me: *points at you and laughs hysterically* Zoro obsessed!
You: *points back* Shanks [Lord girl,MOST DEFINITELY SHANKS], Luffy, Zoro, AND Sanji obsessed!
Me: You got me there. 9_9;
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Write your story or I'll get my revenge! *kicks you*

Whoo~ the mind-reading part in the story preview you wrote sounds kew~l! XD

~PS. Sorry...this is what being sick does to you. x_x

-:- Madness -:-

Ooo!! It sounds so CUTE ^^! You have got to write and post it, or I will have to cry. Really. Because it sounds so interesting, and it isn't all cliche-ish like a lot of stories coming out, ya know. So, PLEASE post soon ^^*! If no one else reviews I will darnit! *nods*

~!shadow kei!~