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| outsidersgirl 2007-07-13 ch 9,   | good story |
| siddika 2007-01-28 ch 9, | Sweet story. |
| Ashley 2005-12-16 ch 9, | aww thats one of the cutest stories I've ever read. |
| dOrKy-GuRl03 2005-11-29 ch 9, | hey gurl...that was a good story...to bad that its had end already...can't believe that its the ends...well so loving it..well gotta go now...so peace out then... |
| emerald 2005-05-30 ch 9, | that was extremely sweet...but i don't think it deserves to get published- sorry and i don't mean any offense...but the story goes really slow at some points-especially the first few chapters and the plot's not that original either...and if you really want to improve it, maybe yo could add some more details about the conversations between those two and display more chemistry between them...for time-pass reading it was definitely adorable but nothing i would add to my book collection...anyways i am going to check out some other fics of yours |
| ItalianQT 2003-08-21 ch 9, | That was a cute story! : ) |
| Silver Scaled Dragon 2003-08-19 ch 9, | That was really nice. |
| Kelley 2003-03-04 ch 9, | Hey, I loved your story! Such a sweet fic. |
| crissy 2003-02-24 ch 9, | this is such a sweet fic. i really liked it. |
| EditorDee 2003-02-20 ch 9, | we're all putting aside college school work, don't worry about it. I loved it! It was sweet, tender and it kept my attention! Keep up the good work! ^.~ |
| sapofbks2008 2003-02-19 ch 9, | I loved the ending. I can't wait for the next story to come. |
| ve 2003-02-19 ch 8, | O. this is good! please continue! |
| SAngel 2003-02-18 ch 8, | evil evil vici! |
| sapofbks2008 2003-02-18 ch 8, | I loved the chapter. But is that the ending? |
| Jess 2003-02-17 ch 7, | Hope everything will work out! (^_^) |