  Tom Sawyer 2004-04-11 . chapter 1 wow! OH MY GOD...it totally sucked...your choose of words was nothing new and exiciting. if you want to be successful try thinking out side the box. the whole boy friend thing has been overkilled. dont take his hand...** cut it off. what is life without despair? dont be so forward trying to find happiness..turn this poetic ** into nothing more than a ** slit milk gland. Where both milk and blod meet the child. |
  Marche De La Lupe 2003-08-20 . chapter 1i liked this one, and good use of metephores (did i spell that rite?) keep up the good work! |
 J-J31 2003-05-12 . chapter 6wow - thats really brilliant. breaktaking. You really should keep writing! |
| Tiny dancer 2003-03-29 . chapter 5 very powerful
nicely done |
| Tiny Dancer 2003-03-29 . chapter 4 woah lots of spelling issues here as well... with instead of will there at the end... kinda messes up the effect for me
you're not a very happy type person, are you? :) i was wondering, why'd you call this "poems of a goth" when it really has nothing to do with being gothic? just wonderin |
| tiny dancer 2003-03-29 . chapter 3 this one started out good... but it kindof went... rotten? i don't like the ending, it just doesn't seem to get your point across like your other poems have
just doesn't have that ring |
| Tiny Dancer 2003-03-29 . chapter 2 wow i really like this one! great job |
| Tiny Dancer 2003-03-29 . chapter 1 yo ha
i liked this poem, but i noticed there were several spelling mistakes. I wouldn't normally comment on that, but there were four or five, and in this short of a poem, i thought it was important to tell you.
the poem is really good, though |
 Catalina Rowana 2003-03-13 . chapter 3wow...ok, this may be a typical review but wow..it's incredible and very powerful...I hate it when people look at me as if I'm not human...as if I'm something strange and bizare...I love it...it's really good...Keep Writing,
Cat |
 No Longer Posting Here 2003-03-11 . chapter 2i can relate. -sigh- very good. |
| No Longer Posting Here 2003-03-11 . chapter 1 That was.marvelous.I cannot seem to find another word to describe that at the moment. |
 PO-TAAY-TOO 2003-03-10 . chapter 2ahahahahahahahahahaha
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| emily v 2003-02-20 . chapter 1 good stuff. better than the crap i've written. most of the time i don't have much patience for goth poetry but your stuff is very intriguing. |
 Saarainjapo 2003-02-16 . chapter 1All of these are brilliant! my favourite was Oh Morbid Me. :D |
 Schmitzy 2003-02-11 . chapter 1Wow...
excellent poetry. I could feel it...
You have excellent skills.
A good day to you.
Schmitzy |
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