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| Thorn's-girl 2005-10-14 ch 1,  | abuse"And then when you fall its usually on your face." I love that. I love this. Very, very, very good. Again, I know how this feels, and it sucks:P Unwritten Laws. The title rocks. |
| influenced by 2003-02-11 ch 1, | abuseWell.. that's left me feeling nice and miserable. I really liked the first bit, wasn't sure about the 'best friend' bit and disliked the last part - which seemed a tad too outrageous. There's definately such thing as true love. Because a lot of people in this world have it. A lot more don't... but you get my point :) Shame to have a slightly weak ending to such a good poem. thanks. |