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| 2lazy2signin 2008-06-15 ch 31, anon. | abuseAwsome! finnaly a story involing a kick ** military chick! loved it!great writing |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-03-10 ch 1,  | abuseKinda boring first chapter. But I still can't wait to read more. |
| atreyu love 2008-03-07 ch 31, | abusei LOVE the story :) and your writing :) |
| atreyu love 2008-03-07 ch 25, | abuseaww, perfect cute moment there! |
| atreyu love 2008-03-07 ch 10, | abusetelling her? tell her what?? hm. suspicious.. makes me wanna read more :) |
| atreyu love 2008-03-07 ch 9, | abusethey are so cute together! |
| atreyu love 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abusewow. i dont know what i would do. |
| yayawhynot89 2007-12-24 ch 31, | abuseThis fic has me considering joining the navy lol seriously |
| Um.ok 2007-11-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseSquare root of 169 in ninth grade? Not unless she was in the extra slow math and rode the short bus to school. Wait, no. She's getting her parking permit regardless of the fact that ninth graders are 14. No, she's sixteen and she's in the slow class. Wow, isn't she special? "The office would like to see you." I didn't know the office had eyes to see with. How about, You need to go to the office. I am amazed that so many read this. Sadly, I've read picture books that had more content and were better written than this. Gee, I hope you were in Middle School when you wrote this, yet the rating is M. |
| DSLuverGurl123 2007-11-09 ch 31, | abuseThis was cute :) I've never read a military story before and it was pretty good. nice job! -Katherine |
| Kristina 2007-08-15 ch 30, anon. | abuseBeautiful! ;) Haha... |
| MelGrl 2007-07-30 ch 31, | abuseAww, this was such a sweet story with a cute ending. I am so glad Corin's family and Abby didn't die, but it was sad that Greg's family died. |
| ess3sandra 2007-07-12 ch 12, | abuseoops somebodys in trouble, darn. the question is, is it her or him? |
| ess3sandra 2007-07-12 ch 11, | abusewow, now were talking, hurekha, ok i cant spell it =P |
| ess3sandra 2007-07-12 ch 10, | abusetelling her what? that he really is ok, or that he will never be ok? hm hm, gotta know. |