Not bad, there are some little mistakes, oh and another thing, maybe you should consider using the word "maiale" instead of "porco" because it is a bit less vulgar. You said to let you know if we see any errors so; well, the title should be IL PORCO CHE VOLAVA. Then where it says on the top "Viveva a Lancaster, Pennsylvania. Viveva su una fattoria" you can also just say "Viveva a Lancaster, Pannsylvania in una fattoria." Sorry if I'm being a little picky here.
Anyway, great job
~Galedriel

I don't understand one word of this but I thought I would let you know how envious I am that you can speak Italian. I would try to learn it but they don't teach it at my high school :( All we have is espanol and after two years of it all I can say is : Me llamo Terra. Y tu? *sigh*
Well, I'm sure the story is great ^.^" I just can't read it. He he.
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra-