"Hope, I will never grasp in my hands. Hope, will always be in my vision." This definitely had me thinking about the idea that "seeing is believing."

Nice, the ending is kinda confusing but I get it after a minute of thinking.
Good job!
Later,
HtW

Magnificent. Hope is always with us, yet at times seems out of reach. The metaphor of the stars was great.


~Heart of the Sword

Hey...I get it. Great point to make, and you presented it well.
~God bless~

Very good... nice imagery.
Keep Writing,
~*ifIVthenDV