^^ wai!! That was amazing!! Whee!! ^__^ Write more! Oh, and .um.i'll post a new poem soon.it's called The Moon's Song. (yeah, wierd title, i know) So, drop by sometimes ok? Thanks! ^_^

wow this is really good! you used great vocabulary and really great imagry! good job!

I like this. K/writing!

The Fire Goddess.

And you should be proud, because it's a nicely written poem.
Keep this up!

I like it! It's strange, in a great way!