i thought this was an amazing story..vibrant in its telling and the visions and how her love was so true. i hope there will be another installment of this particular Mettalic Siren. i thought it was an inspiration to all writers, struggling (hem,hem) and not sruggling. Monkey77, you are an amazing writer and drwaer, please keep up your wonderful, inspiring work. it does more than you know. Amazing...i dodnt normal like romance stories, but this broke that.so well written and so colorful. BRAVO! (gives around of applause!)

love you,

DREW's "baby"

Thanks for reading my story, I wanted to add that there is a picture of clover up at my website
w.geocities.com/mjrinlra/art.html
thanks!

Very touching, Monkey. I loved it!

~ Edward!

I LOVED IT. *Tear* it was so tragic. I am very touched that I was ur inspiration. You are altogether too kind. AND WAAY TO TALENTED FOR YOUR OWN GOOD!! (LOL< JK)