I like these lines:
"This feeling now - like I'm finally sane/The right chemicals pumping through my brain"
I know the feeling. There are times when you can just sit and think "I feel right".

I loved "I need my muse." Really. I tried to make up a muse for a story and it was weird when I drew it. **shrugs** I also liked "A Life Gone Past." Eh, but I like most of the poems I've read here. =P
--Anikki

I really liked the first stanza of 'Speak', and 'Blink, I'm Gone'; very nice pieces.

"The world is crashing down
Without making a sound
No one knows but me
Because it's only the world I see"


I love that!

I love Reflections! All of the other poems are wonderful as well! =3 Keep writing.

This is very good,
I like the prefrences, and all the ideas,
but the rhyme time doesnt work in this power.

If i were u, and i wanted some power to this,
to really make someone feel w/ me,
make it not just a sing-song rhyme.

Keep writing & great idea's too!

Niggles, aka doodlebug, aka dorkbuster

This is so incredibly awesome. I love every single verse in this collection, brilliant.

i think your poem was really good. i liked the your used of vocabulary and structure.e r+r my stuff if u want. i suggest "goodbye to you", "hurt" and "this one is called f* you." keep up the good writing because i would love to read more.
peace
recalcitrant

I like how you've put so many works up, and I'm glad you did like I did, posting in chapters rather than 60 separate works. I like "Blink - I'm Gone" in particular. You seem to have a set style in couplets, but personally, I think you might want experiment in other forms. I do about 99% free verse. I think that too many people are afraid to break out of rhyme, and sometimes you have to force things or make something up just to rhyme. It is easier to have that kind of guideline, but I find it easier and purer to write it straight (and I'm not so poetic I think in rhymes!). But, everyone has their own style, and you should do whatever you want, whatever comes from your heart. Keep writing!

This sounds pretty finished actually.. There are some pretty good pieces up in this collection.. Actually some sounded completed to me but some had this hollow feelin that it never ended.. Anyway back to 'Mindless ramblings'.. Good piece I would say.. Very interestin.. And well expressed too.. Perhaps you could move away from rhymin schemes and write in free verse.. You might be able to write what you feel better.. Just a suggestion.. Anyway, keep writin poetry!

I absolutley love "Blink I'm Gone" :)It's a really strong piece, with a lot of meaning to it. Very good. All of your poetry is really good, but I didn't wanna submit 8 other reviews. *applauds* :)

~disneydiva89

I have allergies and a cold right now... anyways, good poems, all of them. IMO, the last was the best.

You might want to put all of the 'stoner' poems on 1 page.

Good Dune spice description. (When you got into fear, I was like 'oh no, here goes the litany')

It is truly amazing to be your age and have so many poems written. Congratulations. Thanks for getting in touch with me and asking my opinion. Out of all that I read here, my favorites were Stoner (I like pg. 4 best), A Life Gone Past, Word, and Happiness; all are very good. As an editor and mentor, it has been my pleasure to help poets in a lot of different ways. Please visit http://w.threeglances.com and see how life for three poets grew from asking me to read their works. I'd be honored to work with you too. Also, visit my website at http://w.poetryhighway.com and let me know if you would mind me places two of your poems there after you and I work on them a bit together.

yours truly
RoseMeade

ps - now I'm off to read your articles as I am on the hunt for some good sci fi writers...