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midnightrose12206 2009-11-29 . chapter 17
oh my gosh ... he met his dad. wat bout him and masaya now? there has to be more!
saltpepper 2005-11-02 . chapter 17
Hey, once again great work. I've never heard that phase "spherical bastard" eaither... does it have something to do with circular logic? i have no idea really... but i wanna kno...anyway, as always, your work is filled with beautiful writing and deep emotion that cuts to the core. I'm glad Ryu's luck is turning around, he deserves happiness.but i also hope that Masaya can tell ryu his side of the story so Ryu can feel better about his initial view of Masaya, and of course so Masaya can be happy too.
Spawn of Hell 2005-10-25 . chapter 17
neat! it has been a while. im glad i saw you had updated. this storys nice. oh i like keiins father. its nice how keiins perception of him has changed... nice chapter too. should i say update soon?
Tate Soyker 2005-10-25 . chapter 17
Yeah, you're still alive! Good chapter, but if Ryu goes home how will he and Masaya ever get together? Keep up the good work!
Sid Chastity 2005-10-24 . chapter 17
Very good story! Update soon!
InsanoFreakChild 2005-08-17 . chapter 16
I love this story so much! I was so enchanted by it when you first started it. I'm so glad you've updated! More, please? -cute puppy dog eyes-
Spawn of Hell 2005-06-09 . chapter 15
wow! i never thought id ever read more of this! the thing is, i read this story a long while ago and since it wasnt updated i kinda forgot the title. but i still thought about it sometimes(the plot about a boy that leaves everything behind to pursue his dream to become a dancer only to have it crushed cruelly is interesting). so what do i see when i opened fictionpress today? this! yup yup! so i checked and it had been updated! yay! so i dont know if i ever reviewed this story before(except for the bugged review of the 16th chapter, sorry for that...i realised it was a bit ** up and thought itd be best to leave you something more than a period . . . )but just to tell you i really liked it! keep writing! :D
Spawn of Hell 2005-06-09 . chapter 16
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Tate Soyker 2005-06-06 . chapter 16
WOW! This is an awesome story. I love the plot and the twists. You are doing an amazing job on it. I look forward to reading more! Update asap.Tatep.s. Do you read Gravitation?
saltpepper 2005-06-06 . chapter 16
hey again, i read the latest chapter.its been awhile, and i was worried that you'd stopped working on this story. i'm so glad thats not the case. you really have a way with words, your discription jumps off the page for me. keep up the good work. (i hope things turn out alright for Ryu, he could cirtanty use some good luck)
jolene 2005-05-15 . chapter 15
this was phenominal! im hooked. but please update, dont leave us hangin like this.

hoping for a happy ending,jojo
saltpepper 2005-01-28 . chapter 15
I've just finished chapter 15.Exelent use of discription, very profecionaly done.
r.mai 2005-01-24 . chapter 15
=( hope you update soon and hope they make up. XD (and someone should make sure miss evil stays out of the story)
InsanoFreakChild 2004-12-21 . chapter 14
-whines- please update this... please! this is really good, and ive been waitin a long time for an update... please write this soon!
saltpepper 2004-11-18 . chapter 2
Hello!
sorry i didn't submit for the first chap. i just clicked on the second one without thining (i was curious about the mysteryous phone call...)
but here I am reviwing now!
Its a good stoy! I'm pulled into the story by the first paragraph. I like the characters so far(though the only one i really know is the main characer...) I'll read the third capter now.

by the way, just so you know you do have a few misspells...
ex:
“I thought you were never ask.”
I do it all the time and like it when i'm told... don't be angry.
now, on to chapter three!
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