&*TUG*&R^GI&T*& I CAN'T BELIEVE I'VE NEVER READ YOUR STUFF BEFORE; IT'S SO FREAKING GOOD! *glomps mintness*
The plot is simple, rather realistic, but I could sense an underlying tension in the seemingly typical suburban paradise. Even the way the thoughts run as Dylan does something as mundane and ordinary as making lemonade... it's so real. Plus, the characters are believable, especially Dylan and his problem with the perfect twin brother. Jealous twins are not the most original plot in the world, but the fact that it happens so often is enough to give it that realistic charm. It's written rather well, too. Written in the present tense... Now that's not something you see a lot. But it works! Hahah, it really does.
Wow, mint, this is better than most stuff I encounter. Simple, but really effective. I'll be finishing this. ^_^ Later~

Now that was GOOD. ^__^

Mweh, that was SO BEAUTIFUL I wanted to cry. Ok, the ending of Dy's POV was a little cheesy, but it was a GOOD ending. WOW. It always makes me sad to finish someone's story, especially when they're so addicting like yours. You write so realistically it feels I'm there down Dyane and Lara..somehow my favorite character is Carlos..although he is kinda impulsive. I love the way your writing is such a mystery to solve, an enigma to figure out.

Aww. Gd ending, tho sad. I might go read the sequel.

beautiful story, sis..

wow! this is really really good! where have i been all these years?! okay, rather, months. but stil! this is great! man, i'm raving.
at the beginning, i was sorta confused with all the names cause they all started with D. heehee, but i think i got it eventually. i really like ur style of writing. i like the way you do the POVs. they are very good and intriguing. and i think the short, crisp sentences that you use really enhances your story. i enjoyed your plot also, it was really interesting. i'm so glad you ended with a relatively happier note. =) i'm a 'and-they-live-happily-ever-after' kinda person. i can't take angsty stuff well. =D
lolz ok, i admit, i really enjoyed your story thoroughly. so keep up the good work, ya?
& whew! i took such a long time to finish reading this. but it was truly worth every minute :) i promise to read your other fics. but let me get over the stupid mother tongue o levels first okay? til den. ~toodles.

hi ungrateful moose! finally, u updates, after like, JULY? haha. anyway it was worth the wait. nice ending. except the part abt the forest was kinda, confusing. but as i said, im easily confused. the filler was good too. see now i dont feel like writing. i feel demoralised. no wonder mooses are endagered species. =)

Hey hey ! Sharon Lin told me about this.. It's fab ! The thing is.. it's so darn confusing ! Hehehe.. Didn't know what was going on half the time.. Great work all the same.. =)

great plot! but why stop! go yisha! don't let us down!

heys you! guess who. :) got my prologue up. working on more

Very interesting story so far, will be looking forwards to reading some more of it.
Luv Aims :)

this is getting really interesting!wad a nice story.write like this for compo exam and ull top the school man!haha

yisha!!ur a realli gd writer u know.go publish a book!i will so read it!haha...write me some stuff.haha...im feeling lame.but ur a realli good writer!!go migrate!!now!!and get a book published!!:D hurry up n write more.haha...im being lame.

It was good 2 have summ@ from Ezra's pov 4 a change. lol

*shakes head*Chapt 9:Who was the one who went on and on about how great A maths was at the beginning of the year?
hmm...Ezra is committing suicide?why?too...upset about life because she thinks that she's good at nothing?
hmm...u said that the story is ending soon...i dont see an end*grins*anyway, this is great.gambatte!