wow. for someone who claims they have no affiliation for sci-fi, you don't do a half bad job in writing it : ). I'll have to check out the other two stories, definitely

Whoa! O.O Really great story! Very descriptive! I wish you wouldn't leave somewhat of a cliffhanger though! ^_^

This is a pretty goos story. Simple things, like grammar mistakes are almost all I see. You missed the word, "a" here and there, that's about all. Also, I do hope you know that space is absolute nothing. Right in the beginning, you said the mass of space or something like that. Space is the absence of anything; space is nothing. Overall, though good story! Keep writing and if you could, cehck out my story, 2986 Escape.

Wow! What a cool start! Ghost like figures rising form the ground and striking the intruders which just so happen to be our heroes, wonderful! Well, wonderful in the sense that it gives the story a unique space. I must now read more!

* Screams * How could you just stop write there? * Screams again * Very cool. ^_^

hey neat beginning i don't normally read sci-fi that much but this one's awesome!! I loved it, great character descriptions, good wording and all! *that's the stuff i gotta work on* ^_^!
Keep writing! ~*~IceAngel~*~

OOh. creepy! I like! This is really good, no matter that you've never read a science fiction novel! It's sort of sci-fi-fantasy-esque, but it's really good. Actually, if you want my opinion, it's better even than Weaver! I was really surprised by the change - in a good way, of course. ^_~ This is really good! I shall go read more!

Wow, chilling. Good sci-fi! I've attempted, but its never been this good, this is so realistic! Please continue in the sci-fi field, too!
~*~Kiayla~*~

o.this is good so far. And you haven't read a science fiction novel in your life? Hm.now to go read the next part.

A'ight. I'm sort of bad at the horror factor. This was well done, if a little strange. Some of the sentences were awkward, and the characters didn't have enough depth to them. More interaction would have been great, and some more additions to the thought process would have been nice too. Description always helps, no matter if it's fiction or science fiction. Otherwise though, great job. You do well with Sci-fi.
~Toireasa

I normally don't venture into Sci-fi cause I don't like it that much But I must admit this is pretty good. A few things that could be tweaked but otherwise it's good. I feel bad you ended Weaver though.

(In your response what you said, yes, I have slowed the plot down. The story is actually VERY long. And yes, I do favor character development over action. A lot of authors do. If it bugs you, than don't read anymore. It's not your type of story anyway.you, being people 13 and below, not you in general.)

I'm sorry if I sound mean but that's how I feel sometimes. Not trying to be rude^^.

Anyway, I rambled enough. Keep it up.

~CT

This is a great start. Very captivating. One small problem that I noticed was the Captain almost giggling to herself about the payment she was going to get for the shipment, I really couldn't see an experienced Captain giggling. But anyway, I thought it was well-written and very interesting. ;)

This is good. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Excellent! Absolutly excellent! There's no more I can say about it!

oh, spooky. Ghost thingies! That EAT people! . . . sorta. . . ::cough:: Well I liked it. I can't wait to read more! ::waves:: hope you get the short stories and novel up soon!