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| Princess Mulan 2003-02-17 ch 1,   | These are very good! I love how you put the two Haikus in two different POV. Great job! |
| Keep it 100 2003-02-16 ch 1, | I liked this. You did an excellent job by showing the contrast of the two boys. ~Heart of the Sword |
| Zainab 2003-02-16 ch 1, | very good! |
| Hopes Forgotten 2003-02-16 ch 1, | Wow, that's really good. I wish I could write Haikus. |