   D.M. Jackson 2003-12-04 . chapter 13woah k it just bam! ended lol...You have to continue I beg of you no no i plead please please please heh k well you know i like your story i think...hmm...its great! i love it! and its not complete so you have to write more unless there is a sequel or something...hm cant wait to read more...Fate |
 Lucy 2003-12-03 . chapter 1 Im quite confused, is that the ending because it sayd COMPLETE so is the story completed. If thats the ending I'm sorry, but i dont like the ending. And if its not the ending, im sorry, i like the story UPDATE fast! Love the way you write! |
| littlemizego 2003-05-28 . chapter 8 UPDATE>UPDATE>UPDATE>NOW! |
 Dragen Eyez 2003-05-18 . chapter 6aww...poor Xander... he's dorable!! heehee greg's sweet! lol *be's wary of rick* hehehehe |
 Ravenne the Pirate 2003-03-22 . chapter 5CONTINUE!! PLEASE!! PUH-LEASE! It rocks! |
| Dragen Eyez 2003-03-20 . chapter 5 umm... more? what do xander's friends say?! *cries with un-knowingness* you evil person you.. |
| Dragen Eyez 2003-03-20 . chapter 4 ...NAUGHTY language! *smacks* lmao..poor Xander... |
| Dragen Eyez 2003-03-20 . chapter 3 too much japanese... you needa translator thingy! EEP! |
| Ecliptic Form 2003-03-19 . chapter 1 Kick the cat. Many times. No, really, so far, so good. Slightly confusing to read because I have no idea what's going on, but it looks to have a good story line. But Xander? Lol c'mon now, you shoulda named him Bob. Bob the Camel. Keep writing, I want to see where it goes. |
| Dragen Eyez 2003-02-27 . chapter 2 o. moving..not fun. go write some more n' stuffs! good stuffs. it's all sad n' stuffs..i like |
| Dragen Eyez 2003-02-16 . chapter 1 o.! why can't anything -i- right be that good!?!??!?!??!?!?!? MORE MORE MORE! *whines* good stuffs! |
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