damn.

this is my favorite poem.

brilliant...

wish i could say more, but i am now speechless.

*huggles* your poetry is beautiful (I like 'burned in the fire of your vehemence, buried in the obsidian earth' especially). It's so vivid, it's almost painful...

O, very pretty and rad. You're one of my favorites, oh Green Faery.

'A shell emptied, a song silenced, a wing broken

A love lost'

-Sugar

another great one (like you could write anything that isn't fabulous.) i was wondering, would you let me know how old you are? It doesn't say in your bio and i was just wondering. Thnx! Keep writing!

OOh, lovely. The last line is perfect.

That's so sad.::sniffles:: It's written well though. The quality of the poem is good. Very good job with the writing of it. The depth of the poem leaks out all over. Very nice. ::sniffles:: The sadness.

Little Dog Muse