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| Silver Kitsune 2004-09-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my gosh. I loved this story. Thanks for writing it. |
| suiseniki 2004-04-30 ch 1,  | abusebeautifully written. characters are carefully explored, and the story is realistic yet tinged with a fairy quality. superb ending. |
| Anthony66 2003-06-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseJeez, this was the best fiction I ever read. It was so pretty. I loved it! I luved the ending about the mirror, that was perfect! I'm writing my own fic about a boy named Strife and a boy named Val. I hope you'll read it when it's posted! ^_^* Live long and Prosper! -Lil' Anthony ^_^* |
| redredredred 2003-03-28 ch 1, | abusewow! so pretty, don't ever get discouraged just because u didn't get that many reviews, it's just cuz there's nothing after so people are too lazy to compliment... some only leave reviews to ask for more after a cliff-hanger. well, now that that's all said, i really like this story, it's very sweet and i wouldn't mind reading little bits more about their life after... like one-piece shots... hmm, i dunno. but i like the way you write so i think i'm gonna go read more of your stuff now ^^ i hope you write more shounen-ai, err. slash, in the future cuz you do it pretty damn well ^^ good luck ~redredredred |
| Hele 2003-03-24 ch 1, | abusethat's so sweet...damn the homophobes...poor Lawrence and Phillip...they're so sweet...*goes into raptures of delight*...it was really well written...and sweet *goes away to a quiet corner to calm down* |
| Xandra 2003-03-15 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, how touching, and so deep. I loved this. IT'S SO PRETTY, and true too. Gay kids go through hell dealing with stupid people, and you depicted it wonderfully. Bravo, good story! ~Xandra |
| Edana 2003-03-12 ch 1, | abuseWow, what can I say? I really, really like this story and enjoyed reading it. The characters are so sweet and I love the way you portayed them and their interaction - it was very realistic. The characterisation was great and I love the way Lawrence and Philip talked about their lives and their pasts and accepted each other. This could easily be a longer fic but I love that so much emotion is in a short story ^_^ |
| Kiara 2003-02-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseSuper cool awesome story! It was really well written and they're just so lovable! And I really liked the ending with the comparison to a mirror. That was really cool. :) |
| Tiane 2003-02-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseLovely writing. :) |
| Agathy 2003-02-16 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love this story.it's beautiful in an unusual way. The characters are really well-developed and the ending is also excellent. ** guys can be really hot, too =P Anyway, great work, keep writing. |