Reviews for More Like Fiction Each Day

Keahirada 2005-01-10 ch 1,	Its very interesting for sure. I kind of like how it keeps going from poem to story format. The bit where hes dying is just riviting. I love it. Love becca
A&C 2003-07-18 ch 1,	This is really deep. I was a little confused, because some of the details aren't explained, (like, stuff about the school and how Myre died) but then I realized that those really are details and don't matter. I like your descriptions in general. I can draw a clear picture in my mind. I can really understand how Roger feels, even though I've never experienced loss like that, nor am I familiar with the character. But you described it very well. One thing I really liked about this is you showed that sucide isn't the best solution. In this case, Roger was regretting what he'd done, and maybe could have lived happily if he'd just talked to his dad. More of the back story of what led him to that point would be interesting to read. That whole not being human bit confused me, and when her mom was taken away...I dunno. Maybe i'm just too easily confuzzled... One thing I noticed: "They’re faces are so emotionless…" I think you meant to use "Their" ;-) All around, it was very good. I applaud thee. ~A&C
Shankz/Megan! 2003-02-16 ch 1,	OOh. Goodie. Go Manda!