Very powerful. I view things the same way, as well
~Caelestius Zaden

It's easy to take your own life, but to go on living takes real strength and courage.


~Heart of the Sword

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant!

This is really good. I especially liked the message. Only problem I can see is the sacrifice of meaning for rhyming. Poems don't HAVE to rhyme! Or, if you must, you can have a erratic rhyme scheme. That's the only kind I can pull off, anyway.

Definitely a wonderful poem, the meaning is spoken loud and clear, great stuff ^_~

Excellent! You are very talented. Keep writing.

hey chic its the one and only!!

sad people think that suicide is a good way to go all the people u hurt when u leave dont even come to mind

very nice

--live on the EdGe

VERY POWERFUL EMOTIONS behind every sentence you wrote.
Very well written!
Keep it up!

Wow! First of all, the imagery and the content of the poem alone are astounding! Without outright calling it suicide, you wrote an amazing piece of literature about it :) But on top of that, your poem has a real rythym to it--it's definately a poem that would be a lot of fun to read out lout (and I did). Excellent work, you're very talented--keep writing!