Wow...this really sucks. The first chapter, Pfh. Is crap. I mean who the hell punches a locker, because some girl said "no"? He didn't even know her that well, it wouldn't have affected him that bad. And her friends, totally unrealistic. They just laugh, if i saw someone get pissed off and punch a locker close to me, I would shut the hell up until her left. And then I wouldn't say, "Oh that's funny. Haha."I'd be like, "Who the fuck was that freak!?"The second chapter was kinda bearable. But still idiotic and short. And your summery lied, the relationship isn't complicated. It's not even a little twisted. You suck.

yey ^.^ i like it..more please?

You better continue this joint or else I'ma kick your ass! Hurry up, what's taking you long! I haven't got everyday to check and see if you've updated! I'm busy recording in the studio! Hurry!

What's gonna happen??! please finish this story soon, i can't wait to read what is going to happen next

good plot, bad story

not bad...I like your story line...it reminds me of my stories...lol...enlongate the chapters and maybe take sum writing classes to enhance your skills...but so far so good...keep it comin

Wow! I really love your story! Its great! I love stories about punks and preps! They always seem so interesting to me. I really hope you continue soon!!

!~*CherryTrio731*~!

wow. that was cool.yea that sounds like sumthing a prepy girl wud do. i htink ihave a slight crush on Gavin. the name..GAVIN! waho! ok bye.

i luv your story!! update really soon k? cuz i can't wait for more!

hehe.i like it1! update soon!! plz!

Oh wow! That's different. The girl kisses the guy. You don't see that too often. I like it.

wow! this fic sounds like its gonna be really good!! keep up the great work and post more soon please!