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Shin Gokuru-chan 2004-03-06 . chapter 3
Man! you are truly talented...
I write poems but they're not as good as yours
Update soon! ^_^
Gokuru loves your poems!
Shin Gokuru-chan 2004-03-06 . chapter 2
You know you should put your poetry on poetry.com
If you register there and enter the poetry contest you may get your work published!
It's really good
I think you'd win!
Shin Gokuru-chan 2004-03-06 . chapter 1
I loved the poems
I'm a big poetry fan
I heard you like the story Ryuchi put up for me!
Gokuru's happy now! ^_^
you can check out more of my stories if you can!
Well I'm off to the next chapter!
The Cheshire Kitten 2003-11-09 . chapter 2
WOW! This is not exactlty what I'm feeling at the moment (which is more along the lines of - "Come on! Fall in love with me already!) , but it's still one great poem! I like the use of imagery, which is fabulous - it paints a portrait of winter in the weather and in your heart - and the metaphor of "Remain the Sun-King, and I Snow-Queen". Great job!
Lavender Megumi 2003-07-18 . chapter 3
Wow...good! If i could write poems like you...::drules::..^^;; heh heh...
midnight dreams 2003-06-02 . chapter 2
*happy sigh* i loved the imagery. ^^ Oh, and i really like this line: "A wonderful yellow icing on marshmallow fields"

I found that really cute. ^^ Galing, kabayan.

Please vist me sometime? :) Thank you.
Calla Lily 2003-05-14 . chapter 1
Wow, those were all really good. You describe things so therouly, I can see exactly what you're writing about.
BlackCat03 2003-05-03 . chapter 3
impressive, all are brilliant, thanx for reviewing. nyhow, i like the one bout the snow queen, i bow before ur brilliance ^__^
Interlude 2003-03-31 . chapter 3
marshmallow fields! ^_^; yeah... very nice/pretty! *blinks* this guy is either very sweet, or just some jerk who knows how to use pretty language. *blinks* um... yeah- i guess he could be nice, right? *nods* (mumbles) how many guys are like that, though? love this stuff- keep writing! ^_^
anghel 2003-03-19 . chapter 3
i definitely love this one! keep on writing! try checking out my pieces!
Sakura Avalon or Kinomoto 2003-03-02 . chapter 3
wai wai!
i really like this one.. very much!
i like your idea too!
im jealous.sniff sniff.
^-^ keep up the great work!
i hope to see you back at fanfiction.net soon, for i am in love with your stories!!
dont keep me..us waiting!!
* holds forks and spoons!*
ja ne!
~*~ sakura avalon or kinomoto
Sakura Avalon or Kinomoto 2003-03-02 . chapter 1
ohayo, this is sakura here.
tee hee. i absolutely loved this poem. unique and very very well written. you are a marvolous writer, tee hee.
welp, imma going to read ur other poems now..
Sakura kura 2003-02-26 . chapter 3
wow, i like this. Seems well thought out, and well written indeed! ^-^ Keep writting!
(Thanks for reading mine, and i have more at Sakura kura pen name)
-sakura kura
Shadow Ash 2003-02-23 . chapter 3
I love this poem too. I can see it, you are very good at using imagery in your poems. Keep writing poetry, and I'll keep reading!
Shadow Ash 2003-02-23 . chapter 2
Ahh! It's so GOOD!
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