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Furry Elf 2004-12-06 . chapter 8
damn. is she the mom from the dream?? or is he still down in the basement with the child?? ah... too many questions, and you haven't updating in forever. please spare me the torture.
Unheard-Screams 2004-08-30 . chapter 8
huh? update soon and explain the next chapter!
Unheard-Screams 2004-08-30 . chapter 1
wait...its a guy? i think it should be a girl. but he has long hair?...im confused. and i wouldnt leave a body to rot in there, besides, some ppl would have surely smelled it. oh well, its v. good though
Endless Nightmares 2004-03-14 . chapter 8
Hmm-
Major improvement on the descriptions, and details of things. It pays off in the end, and hopefully the end will just be a great as this chapter was.
Endless Nightmares 2004-03-14 . chapter 7
Hello-
Heh, I've had writers block, but I'm over that.
Shortest chapter, but it had enough to help it.
Endless Nightmares 2004-03-14 . chapter 6
Hello-
More dialogue, and its pretty good.
Endless Nightmares 2004-03-14 . chapter 5
Hmm-
Its getting better. Nicely done.
Endless Nightmares 2004-03-14 . chapter 4
Hmm-
Nice job.
Endless Nightmares 2004-03-14 . chapter 3
Hello-
Olny thing I could do to this is cut some of the paragraphs down to smaller size. Overall, nicely done.
Endless Nightmares 2004-03-14 . chapter 2
Hmm-
Hopefully there is gore in the next chapter, but all in all, nice chapter.
Endless Nightmares 2004-03-14 . chapter 1
Hmm-
Interesing first person story so far.
PoLiT3 PuNk 2004-03-10 . chapter 8
Whoa...what was up with that? Don't get me wrong the story kicks **, can't wait for the rest! don't stop writting
The Eraser 2003-08-08 . chapter 6
It's really a great story. I'm assuming a lot of it is based on your personal experiences? I can sympathize...I hope you continue it.
MiniMichelle2 2003-07-27 . chapter 6
coolness!! I absolutley love this story...however depressing it may be it is still amazing. Keep up the good work :-D
bummer 2003-07-18 . chapter 6
Eihehehehe! MINDLESS SELF INDULGENCE!
"**" has to be one of the coolest songs.
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