damn. is she the mom from the dream?? or is he still down in the basement with the child?? ah... too many questions, and you haven't updating in forever. please spare me the torture.

huh? update soon and explain the next chapter!

wait...its a guy? i think it should be a girl. but he has long hair?...im confused. and i wouldnt leave a body to rot in there, besides, some ppl would have surely smelled it. oh well, its v. good though

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Major improvement on the descriptions, and details of things. It pays off in the end, and hopefully the end will just be a great as this chapter was.

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Heh, I've had writers block, but I'm over that.
Shortest chapter, but it had enough to help it.

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More dialogue, and its pretty good.

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Its getting better. Nicely done.

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Nice job.

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Olny thing I could do to this is cut some of the paragraphs down to smaller size. Overall, nicely done.

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Hopefully there is gore in the next chapter, but all in all, nice chapter.

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Interesing first person story so far.

Whoa...what was up with that? Don't get me wrong the story kicks **, can't wait for the rest! don't stop writting

It's really a great story. I'm assuming a lot of it is based on your personal experiences? I can sympathize...I hope you continue it.

coolness!! I absolutley love this story...however depressing it may be it is still amazing. Keep up the good work :-D

Eihehehehe! MINDLESS SELF INDULGENCE!
"**" has to be one of the coolest songs.