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| ScarletWishingstar 2003-12-21 ch 1,   | short but gets the point across...luvly *~*`//*~* |
| Keep it 100 2003-03-10 ch 1, | This was thought provoking. ~Heart of the Sword |
| Pardalis 2003-02-21 ch 1, | The repetition gets the point across clearly. I like it. |
| A Silent Grain 2003-02-20 ch 1, | It's wonderfully descriptive, but something. I think it just doesn't go anywhere. I'm looking for an application of this. Maybe put this into a situation, or a person, or combination of the two and see what happens. Wonderful use of words, though, and I felt a sincerity when I read it. I like to look for that in poetry. Good job. --Jared |