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Vampira Roja 2003-07-01 . chapter 1
I like the way you repeat "Falling Stars." It gives you something to expect, and also some stability along with a little rhyme scheme. I think I get the underlying meaning, because sometimes that's exactly what happened to me.
Starlight Rain 2003-04-17 . chapter 1
Pretty... I like the repetition of the line "Falling Stars", and how it eventually fades from every other line to every three or so. It leaves kind of a fading feeling, just like the stars ^.^

~~Starlight Rain
Pace 2003-03-30 . chapter 1
hee hee it RHYMES! (^.^)
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