such a powerful poem. What piques my interest is how you inject such power even into emotions that make one weak. Haha. Keep writing.

again, ouch. lol. your stuff are so great!

Nice story I like it. I really do. I like when another character in a story does not know what the other character goes through just for them to be noticed. It's kinda like Mix's story I just read where this girl goes through hell because of this man who doesn't even know what he does to her. Conitue writing please and keep up the good work

You love sad stuff, don't you? Thankfully, I do too

hey! i feel the same way about a special boy in my school too! they just don't know. great story!

keep on writin!

wow, i can relate to this, its really good!

wow, lol you dont know how many guys i've crushed on like that.

havent' read anything really good in like so long.. great job!

*alicia*