FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| chevy-luv 2005-03-08 ch 1,   | nice 1st chapter...so r u brian? |
| Lickity-Split 2004-12-10 ch 17, | hey, where's the rest? i gotta read more! this is too good. i like the way you can write so naturally. good work, keep it up, i look forward to reading more! |
| Esquirella 2004-11-06 ch 17, | This is a very original way to tell a story. I like this a lot! |
| verus pax 2004-06-04 ch 17, | Very nice! I'm just miffed that i have to wait for the next chapter! Youve got me hooked. Are you a guy or girl? Either way i must say its very good if you are a girl, i don't know any of that stuff on cars! And the part of Jessica's Dairy was pretty good too! Just again, try not too use so many songs, if you do try to only put the chorus or the important part. That's srt of when i didn't read all of it. K Keep Going! It very good! |
| verus pax 2004-05-29 ch 1, | Hey nice! Very neat, no bad spelling grammar not too carried away with the american writing and all... Overall very neat, it would sit nicely upon the shelves at the book store! Well i won't exaggerate not the best I have read, but the second best I've read so far on this site. Keep up the good work, and don't let the songs be too long, not many people read them. |
| goofball 2003-10-09 ch 17, | woo you are such a good writer... i just came back and i hadn't read it in like two months but did you end it or somthing? it says it hasn't been updated since june.. i want to read more!! send me email brit@maine.rr.com if theres any more that you haven't posted or somthing. i love this story! |
| Pamela 2003-07-31 ch 17, | nice new chapter! |
| twilightkiss 2003-06-30 ch 17, | its god plz keep writing |
| Pamela 2003-06-20 ch 16, | hey.. still going on pretty good! |
| Jazzy Kitty 2003-06-11 ch 16, | aww... good developments. keep it up |
| Brit 2003-06-08 ch 15, | Oh no is he going to break up with her? thats so sad! Please update soon! |
| twilightkiss 2003-06-07 ch 15, | omg is he gonna break up w/ her??! or are they even like really going out? I'm a tiny *bit* confuzzed :\ (which isn't a suprise lol Im always confuzzed) well i can't wait till you update so please do it SOON! hehehe! I love the story! |
| FamousOneLiners 2003-06-02 ch 14, | I love AFI! |
| twilightkiss 2003-06-02 ch 14, | wow I love this story...write more and I mean SOON! hehehehe *smiles* |
| Pamela 2003-06-02 ch 14, | awfully sweet... still love this! |