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kt 2009-05-16 . chapter 1
hi, I know I'm nitpicking but I'm pretty sure you can't go out of Cambridge with a physics degree. Their course is natural sciences so you leave with a MSci or a bachelor.
The only reason I know is that it annoys tons of students every year who want to do a pure science course and not just specialise a year or two in.

Nice start though, good work on your characters, very likable but very human :)
kk 2008-11-25 . chapter 22
I really enjoyed this!! It was well paced and i fell in love with both brothers!!
Gentle. Edge. 2008-11-24 . chapter 22
That was such a sweet ending. I'm curious if Kate went back to England, but it was still really good. They all got their happy endings and it was written well :)
Gentle. Edge. 2008-11-22 . chapter 1
I really liked the amount of details you put into the characters and how real their life seems to be. The idea of your story seems really good and I can't wait to read more of it :D
anne 2008-10-05 . chapter 22
Wow, five and a half years?! You should be really proud of yourself..It was a really good story, and I really like your choice of verbs and the characters' thoughts. It brings the reader into the story so much that it feels like he or she personally knows them. There's definitely room for improvement, but I think it's pretty good already :) compared to the other fictionpress writers.
Mage Dudette 2008-10-05 . chapter 22
woo! well done on completing this ^_^ i still enjoyed it and i'm glad you managed to get it finished. i know i would'av thrown it in by now!

and actually its probably a story i'll revisit; there are some cute and funny moments that i really liked.

congrats again!
'dudette
anonymous 2008-07-23 . chapter 21
Gosh, that took forever. I love this story. I almost forgot what the thing was about. I was so excited when I remembered. Please, oh please don't take so long to update next time. I don't think my memory will be as keen next time, hehe.
Ally Moose 2008-07-20 . chapter 21
I luvv your story :)

Is there just one more chapter left??
Mage Dudette 2008-06-11 . chapter 20
damn, what a cliffhanger! i like this story though, despite a peek at your profile where you say you didn't like it anymore.. i think it's really good.

i think its sweet and funny, and i'm all for sam and kate, they're my favourites here, and wish owen and iris would sort themselves out already :P

hope you do continue this soon though, be nice to see it rounded off :)
Nuttyginger 2008-05-06 . chapter 20
I've just read all 20 chapters and am loving it it so much so far.

Looking forward to more.

Zoe
dreamforever101 2008-05-01 . chapter 20
OMG!! You HAVE to update!! Who objected?!?!
'K i m m e h. 2008-04-17 . chapter 20
Woot! Update :D
Hm. I'm going to kill the person that said "I object" >;[
I don't like the Kate x Sam and Iris x Owen pairings :[
Eleia 2008-04-12 . chapter 20
::dies:: Good grief, what a cliffhanger! That's one to keep a person up at night turning the pages. In other words: Need. New. Chapter. ... Please. ;)
I Murder on Impulse 2008-04-12 . chapter 20
haha! like the ending, i cracked up lol
'K i m m e h. 2008-03-09 . chapter 19
Update? :[
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