Hey (I'm sure you know who this is!), great story!! Very inventive and imaginative! Keep it up!

lol, i love you straight forward way of writing, keep it up!

good again, the 3rd paragraph seemed a little out of place though *was confused*
i really like the last paragraph, especially the part where he is taken aback though he has no back to take! keep going!

oh Digger, I love it! lol, srry i can't get on im, my dad is on the comp! continue on the thugs part, i like that! keep working!