i love this! its approprite for little kids (though some would not be allowed to because of the violence) and i loved it! i hope you do more 'cheesy' romance/fantasy tales like this

Awe, so sweet!! Brought a tear to my eye ^_< Very well done, and guess what? I'm now caught up with everything! Yay! ^_^

Awe, so sweet. I love reading love stories...don't know why cos I suck at writting them!

Constructive critisism - I found a lot of typos while reading this. It didn't take away from the story though. I still knew what you meant. I'm just picky about spelling.

Anyway, great job! I love the whole mistaken identity senario. There always needs to be some kind of problem in love stories, and this one was great. I really enjoyed reading this.