Oh my word, I almost cried I was so deeply moved. Such a sweet story with wounderful emotions protraded Oh so well. I praise you my dear for this story is a true delight!

Very cool!! Love the Dragon boy ^_^ Are you going to be writing more with their daughter? Cos that would be cool to see. lol, you know how much I love Dragon stories ^_< Awesome work!

Excellent concept for a story. It woked really well, and I enjoyed reading it.
A bit of constructive critisism - you need to go over this and fix up the typos. There were quite a few. But that's the only thing I found wrong. You've done an excellent job on this. I've never been too good with love stories myself, but this was great. So full of emotion. Well done!