This is a great story and i really enjoyed it. And it was funny when she told bryan it was his fault they they had girls and he denied it. This was a good read.

This is a cute/cool story. It's interesting to think about the concept of fate and the role it would have played in this story... like is fate timeless? I don't know. Weird, deep questions, but I don't really have the time to go into them now since i actually have homework to do, haha. Anyways, I just wanted to leave a quick review for this story since I read it. I thought that some parts were a little rushed/summarized like the whole Sinclair battle thing. It was confusing because one moment Sinclair was in the room with her and the next he was out there fighting and somehow Delia had gotten her bow and arrows back. It was a little confusing. I think you could have also spent a bit more time developing the relationship between Delia & Bryan, and really maybe have showed more of the loving moments between them and such, built up their chemistry or whatnot a bit more.

ANyways, I like the concept of this story. I'm really interested in what the history books had said about Bryan before Delia came through the time machine - that would have been interesting to know. Cute story.

-- Alyssa

ok, I totally loved this story though there were times that I was slightly confused. like when she was taken into the house, or when she was captured... things like that seem to go really quickly. anyhow... fantastical story! and I can't wait to read the others!

this story is so different, and totally fun and interesting! :D great job

Ah I always loved this story, I always come back to it time and time again like a good book. Why don't you get it published properly, that would be so cool! I wish there were other time travel stories like it, some of them are just so poorly written, it's such a disappointment. Gonna look back on your profile page for other stories etc. And again, well done for such a brilliant story!!

i havent read your story yet but the summary sounds similar to the outlander series by diana gabaldon. im not saying its a rip off or anything, just thought you'd like to read it. anyways i'll start reading your story now=)

this is preatty much the best time line story i have ever read...besides the actual movie. anyway i loved it, great characters excetera. keep it up

I LOVE IT.

AWSOME STORY!O,O

i wish u luck on your writing!
A Dark Rose

very nice

This story is absolutely amazing. My college roomie (lilyamongthorns98) had been reading it while I was packing up my side of the room for the summer, and she kept telling me different things that she was reading from your story. I began to read it at about midnight (when I should have been going to bed) and I couldn't put it down. I read the story until 4:30 am when I finally gave up and went to sleep for about two hours. lol. I actually love this story so much that I have read it twice. Great job!

That was an adorable story. I loved the ending, that was a great way to close it up, with the granddaughter's letter. The only thing I could suggest as being really important is a better description of the characters. When you first meet a character you should paint a picture of what they look like I think. Anyway, it was well done and I cant wait to read more of your stuff!

Oh my goodness. This was such an amazing story. I was hooked from like the second chapter. All evening I have been sitting here in my dorm room reading this story to its end. My room-mate can atest to it. I've been reading aloud the funny parts and now she's reading it herself. It was great. I loved it. Something about falling in love after being forced into a marriage appeals to me. I've always loved those stories. Anyway, I loved it, it was sad, hilarious, sweet, heartwrenching, and romantic all at the same time. Good work.

I just thought of something... You could maybe do a follow-up thing about the decendants of Melanie and Delia!! That would be fun! Sorry, just an random thought that came to me three years after you finished this!! Kirstyx

I just read ur story and i absolutely love it! it's so good. any chance of a sequel? See ya