 TheJadedInsomniac 2009-12-04 . chapter 1Psychology and realism.
Can't say I don't love this.
- TJI |
 carmice3 2004-02-02 . chapter 1Very stylish. Your Palanuik influences are showing. The character here reminds me of whatisname from 'Choke'. Mean, socially reprehensible and gleefully unrepentant.
Well written indeed.
Irreverent; that's the word I was looking for. |
 Not so Average 2004-01-18 . chapter 1Definitely has edge and is pretty cruel. But hey, you speak the truth and it's kind of ironic how naive girls can be. |
 warnthepenguins 2003-11-01 . chapter 1Ouch. That's harsh. And probably not the healthiest outlook on life.
Hey! I'm that geek! Only without the girlfriend. Hm...is that *better*, or *worse*, according to this essay? |
 nabriton 2003-10-13 . chapter 1Not evil...not even remotely. Nice job with the honesty...we need more people who don't care what other people think. |
 KT the Shimmer Skank 2003-02-20 . chapter 1OOh. What a fun read. I like the pacing. Good way of capturing the characters, and the fact that the narrator is totally evil is awesome. I dig this. |
 Monique 2003-02-20 . chapter 1 Amazing, incredibly interesting and poignant but edgy. Loved it. |