Happy ending? Awesome. I like this, really. It's vaguely random, vaguely pointless, but not really. I love it! Wonderful job.

I liked this ^_^

Hee, very cute fic! Ten is a bit stalker-ish and creepy, keeping tabs on John for 2 years, haha. But it just shows his...determination to win. Great work with this!

~fd97

I just wished to say that I first read this when it was published on and i'm really happy to find it again...
I loved it, despite it's many plotholes: I think it is a romantic, well-written piece, and the characters are very well defined...
So thank you for hours of enjoyment!
Should you ever need a beta... ;)

this sory is love.
good job good job.

I will not say I understood most of their conversation and the subtle back-and-forth hesitations; I probably followed about half of it, and that's being generous. But one thing I think I'm able to get: those two are very well-created characters, and, given their quirks, their relationship is and probably will often be on ever-shifting grounds.

That had to make no sense. At any rate, this was magnificent.

great story ^_^ I thought that the whole plot was awesome, and i loved John, Ten and Clarice =] Hope you write more work like it =]

wow. that was cute. :)

and the plot thickens!:) I'm saorry I couldn't help myself. I like this story a lot and what makes it better is Ten didn't just randomly pick John and that's the only thing that bother me about the story. Very good.

Yay. I like this story.

I just love the writing - your english was so fun to read. :)

I love it! You made something much deeper out of something that might have appeared easy and shallow at first. Somewhat like real life, really.

By the end, Ten didn't seem so in control, and John actually showed us a side of him that seemed unexistent before. Endeavors are what makes it all believable. It is beautiful and gorgeously written. I consider this as a true piece of art, which touches in so many ways the imagination and heart of the reader.

Truly wonderful!

Heh, when I started reading this, I was like "Oh no, not another random romance novel where the characters fall in love before even talking"... but when the story progressesd and you found out all about Ten knowing about John, it totally came togeather in a beautiful (and somewhat more realistic) story! Very cute!

You refered to this story as your 'fairy tale story' which just has to explain why I'm so giddy and squealing right now. I feel like a complete fool, but it's just so cute! Ten threw Jay out the door! That actually made me cheer out loud, and in turn drew questioning glares in my direction. It's beautiful!

This is all rushed and fluffy and YAY! It's original, and I like it! Nya-ha! Ten more chapters to go! Right, I sound like I'm on crack... oh well, can't have everything.