fun fun fun _

at the end, the character development seemed a bit fast, but I enjoyed the ride. fun story : )

You neglected to mark your story as complete. But yes, the ending was satisfactory.

Thanks for the up I thoroughly enjoyed this fiction! -

Happy ending? Awesome. I like this, really. It's vaguely random, vaguely pointless, but not really. I love it! Wonderful job.

I liked this _

Hee, very cute fic! Ten is a bit stalker-ish and creepy, keeping tabs on John for 2 years, haha. But it just shows his...determination to win. Great work with this!

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I just wished to say that I first read this when it was published on and i'm really happy to find it again...

I loved it, despite it's many plotholes: I think it is a romantic, well-written piece, and the characters are very well defined...

So thank you for hours of enjoyment!

Should you ever need a beta... ;)

this sory is love.

good job good job.

I will not say I understood most of their conversation and the subtle back-and-forth hesitations; I probably followed about half of it, and that's being generous. But one thing I think I'm able to get: those two are very well-created characters, and, given their quirks, their relationship is and probably will often be on ever-shifting grounds.

That had to make no sense. At any rate, this was magnificent.

great story _ I thought that the whole plot was awesome, and i loved John, Ten and Clarice ] Hope you write more work like it ]

wow. that was cute. :)

and the plot thickens!:) I'm saorry I couldn't help myself. I like this story a lot and what makes it better is Ten didn't just randomly pick John and that's the only thing that bother me about the story. Very good.

Yay. I like this story.

I just love the writing - your english was so fun to read. :)

I love it! You made something much deeper out of something that might have appeared easy and shallow at first. Somewhat like real life, really.

By the end, Ten didn't seem so in control, and John actually showed us a side of him that seemed unexistent before. Endeavors are what makes it all believable. It is beautiful and gorgeously written. I consider this as a true piece of art, which touches in so many ways the imagination and heart of the reader.

Truly wonderful!