OH man...I'm getting a feeling that the ending of this story is going to be sad. I hope I'm wrong. (fingers are crossed)

Seems interesting. I hope you continue with it, though.

Wow. I really love this. I hope you continue it soon!
*~Vicky*~--*~--

:(:(:( You HAVE to update! You can't leave me like this!

Wow. Talk about stubborness.

No! Cliffie=evil! How many times must I tell you?!

Did I mention that the imagery in this is great?

Ah! No! Don't take her away!!

(I see two options: Either Raedan takes them all on his own, or he brings people from the village to help. Bringing people from the village could demolish Eira's people's quite way of living, but going on his own would be suicide. Ack! It's one of those situations where there is no right choice! I hate those! Ah, well, I'm sure you'll come up with something. ::hinthint::)

Carlses

Excellent! I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter, and the new updates after that. I really love the protective sense Raedan has over Eira, and I hope he realizes that Lynet is most certainly not his type. I haven't really met her, yes, but I have the feeling that she's rather snobby, and very much a flirt. He doesn't need that.

Carlses

Wow, an amazing chapter!
The way the ending of the it builds up is great, with all the tension from Eira's tribesmen and also between the two main characters, and I love the way Eira is so determined to save Raedan and accept her own fate, while still keeping her pride when she doesn't want to mar his last view of her walking.
This is a really beautiful, sad and touching story so far. I hope you update soon!

Wow. I'm intrigued. I really regret that I can't keep reading this right now, but I've gtg. Promise I'll be back, tho. :)

My friend! What a lovely first chapter. Your descriptions are terrific, which they have to be when describing a fantasy place.and I could really see the mountain, the dotted villages, the man napping, everything. I like the world you've created as well as how quickly you've managed to give me a feel for your two main characters. Very nice. I am looking forward to reading the rest, lol, when I have two spare moments. ;-) -M

I still cannot believe that this is your first time writing original fiction. This is a really good story you have here, and it is definetly going on my favorites list. Keep writing!

Wow, this is really good so far! I love your characters; they seem really well rounded and believable, and I like your names! The way you describe things is also really good - like 'bruised sky' and phrases like that. Keep going with it!
There are a few spelling and grammatical errors, but not loads. Otherwise - it's great!

Wow.can't wait to read more! ^.^